Simplicity
by NucleusFire (Member) - published: December 12, 2008
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Category - Poetry
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I Paint
We Draw
They Drink
Collect

I Fail
We Create
They Fall
React

I Hurt
We Stand
They March
Fight

I Draw
We Kill
They Create
Cycle

I Die
We Grow
They mourn
Death

I Exist
We Live
They Breed
Fuck

I Release
We Evolve
They Die
Life

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The following comments are for "Simplicity"
by NucleusFire

POEWHIT
Captures a lot of life in those few words. Makes one think for a moment.

( Posted by: poewhit [Member] On: December 13, 2008 )

"I draw"
Interesting poem N.F. Cyclical and triangulating. It speaks to me of narcissistic tendencies, inner-group favoritism, and outer-group derogation. Thank you for sharing!

Best,
Ariana

( Posted by: Ariana [Member] On: December 15, 2008 )

Thanking two
Poewhit, Thanks for your feedback. Turned out rather diffrent than I imagined but I am happy for what came about.

Ariana, Thank you for reading and Narcissistic Tendenicies makes me laugh as I realize that in it once you mentioned. I always enjoy and admire your works.

-Christopher

( Posted by: Nucleusfire [Member] On: December 15, 2008 )

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