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If love is gone
If love is away
I can't see a happy day
when love is gone

If love is gone
I can't give roses
Life lacks of details
Datails to be romantic

When love was here
Every day looked brighter
The sun looked shiner
No chance for a single tear

Now love is gone, there are no fantasies
When I sleep and try to dream
It hurts when memories come to me
When love was here were no mysteries


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