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“Choose your color. 
Purple is a fantastic choice 
And I adore stripes. 
Have you decided on a shape? 
Square? Yes its all the rage. 
Home Delivery?  
Or would you like to jump right in? 
Yes that would be no problem. 
Here are your keys, 
Remember once you are in,  
Battery life should keep you going 80-90 duals. 
Be careful at this height, its quite a fall. 
Don’t look down, and never look back. 
What to expect? Good question. 
This booklet answers all queries extensively.  
There are no refunds or exchanges,  
We guarantee satisfactory utopia.  
Finally Madam, 
A little tip I always give, 
The Humans always respond when you smile” 


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