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This afternoon I saw a snowy day
This afternoon I saw people hugging each other
This afternoon I saw two birds kissing each other
On the end of a winter day

Who in the entire world would care
If last afternoon I saw a snowy day
If I saw a bird loving its love
Your dreams and your peace I do not try to rob

I do not know if somebody would care
I do not know if you miss me and love me
I do not know if you are with somebody else
I just know all this happened and you were not there



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