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Sometimes I did not think

I went away from my true feelings

You wanted to see me grow bigger

Despite how weak I am

I could not find the way

To become a normal person

Sometimes I went down

You pulled me out of the hole

That is why I love you

I am sorry you were living in suffering

There is nothing else, than to admire

A persone with so much fire

Fly, fly beautiful dove

No reason to look behind

Unless in your human kind

Still exists ashes of love

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