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I'm part of the world you bought,
I'm part of your every thought,
I'm part of your dreams, of your hopes and desires,
I am your future, I am your fire.

I'm inside the remnants of what you were before.
You eat me, you breathe me, I make your lips sore,
If I'll ever dream you, you'd better run in fright.
I hate you. i love you. Please kill me tonight.

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I'm part of the world you bought me.


------
Stille


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