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I love you.
In your eyes I've drowned.
In a smile, in a feeling, in a dream.
I've lost my soul, my mind, myself.
I now only see through your eyes.
I can't dare a smile, my world
Is in this tear I shed for you.
I'm blind, insane, but hope you know
That I love you, when there is nothing left to say.


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by Dew Of Blood

Drop for Drop
There is a tear drop
in every world...
and a world in every tear drop

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: May 27, 2016 )

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