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Kneeling on the blue stone,
In a world tainted by rivers
I drop a kiss for you,
From pale lips, from open eyes.

A key you've buried into my soul.
The pearl key of starlight and clouds.
With it I've opened my white sunsets.
But I've lost it on the cheek of the moon.

An angel of lilies floats down the river,
With veils full of water and tears.
Sends me a smile and then goes away.
Another friend lost in the morn.

The asphodel crown is heavy on my brow.
And in the world with angels floating on rivers,
With white sunset and morn, with lily lakes,
On the blue stone I kneel, humbly

------
Stille


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The following comments are for "A world - a pearl in the necklace"
by Dew Of Blood

Influencial
A piece of soothing expression, a sort of suddenly-found something very precious,a folktale that simply gets inside our nostalgia, a sleeky edge of blade that makes us bleed at heart, an articulation to defy the world for the sake of love, a poem that says never love........
Very influencial poetic expression, indeed.

( Posted by: Myth [Member] On: July 8, 2004 )





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