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a smile
by lippynelson (Member) - published: September 24, 2008
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Category - Poetry
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i have said with a smile on my face
my heart’s disgrace,
my words tip-toe through the air
in despair.



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by lippynelson

Glad to calmly reveal my mistakes
This seems like one finding a relief in some sort of confession of something that has carried with it the weight of the entire universe.

Kind of like opening up in a theraputic form.

made me think

( Posted by: TAMMYHENDRIX [Member] On: September 29, 2008 )





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