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_Nightfall_ 
 
The sun sets... 
And the show begins! 
 
The clouds glow with 
Slow-motion majesty. 
 
Echos of the day in the sky; 
And echos of song in the chapel: 
 
Beauty and harmony 
Playing in unison. 
 
Then nightfall. 
And serentiy reigns. 
 


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Spudley Strikes Again
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The following comments are for "Nightfall"
by Spudley

to midnightmare
Midnightmare,

Thanks for the comment. Yes, you got it pretty much spot on with the way it's meant to sound. :-)
Sorry for the typos... I seem to do quite a few of them when I'm posting here. (must learn to spell-check first!)

By the way, if you're interested, the sunset which inspired it is captured in a photograph, which I've just put online: www.spudley.com/miscpics/castle1_sm.jpg. (it's reduced for quick loading, but I think you'll still be able to see why it was so inspirational ;-))

( Posted by: Spudley [Member] On: March 21, 2003 )

Toodles.
cool dude

( Posted by: lovesessence [Member] On: August 10, 2003 )





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