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Remember those dreams 
Aboard ships 
Sinking low, soaring high 
Boards for walking dusty walks 
Teardrops falling 
Raindrops peeking 
Dizziness, this mass of confusion 
Swinging swaying,  
Lord of the dance 
Lassos lashing, whipping 
Our only safety lines 
Calmness serenity and smiles 
Tormenting these seas 
Torturous mind-fields of those dreams 
Ahoy and hurray,  
Seagulls soaring dancing with the breeze, 
Basking these sunlicous delights, 
Walking the blanks,  
Skin teasing the saffron rays 
Tomorrow’s daybreak 
Docks this sleepless night. 


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