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by lippynelson (Member) - published: September 8, 2008
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Category - Poetry
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your skin is a shadow in the heat
your touch the cool of darkness
your kiss a dreamless sleep

all these things are given to me
in an empty hand

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The following comments are for "empty"
by lippynelson

Spare and I'm awed
Thanks for making my day! This is great lippy. I love the economy of it, the romanticism of it.

( Posted by: sebastian08 [Member] On: September 10, 2008 )

Erotic
A delicious little set of lines here. Barely controlled passion . . .

( Posted by: viper9 [Member] On: September 10, 2008 )

empty
Thank you for your kind comments.

( Posted by: lippynelson [Member] On: January 20, 2009 )

@ lippynelson
I'm glad you stopped in to read your comments. It pulled this to the top, and brought it to my attention.

I must say: I am much better off for having read this poem!

Ochani

( Posted by: OchaniLele [Admin] On: January 20, 2009 )

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