Average Rating 0.00 (0 votes) You must login to vote I’m falling Off the tight rope line Its threads began to fray And I lost my concentration As I fall Now I can’t remember What the ground feels like I see him on the lawn But he wouldn’t help me Remember or Break my fall – He is his own Rapunzel Es tut mir Lied All he can say to me Now I’m falling fast Where did my safety net go? Where's my best friend today? She’s never left me to fall Like I am doing now What is this ground Going to feel like Now no one I hoped Would help me down They all disappeared Now I’ve fallen off Into another plane... ...And their indifference is forgiven... ------ "If you get a feeling next time you see me Do me a favor and let me know 'Cos it's hard to tell It's hard to say Oh well, okay" Elliott Smith

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