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If you ask any girl, she'll tell you, there are not words to express the feelings in her heart.
Like people pulling you in two directions, about to tear you apart
People say Life is like one big world- Sometimes it's hell, yet at times it can be Heaven
They say in this world, your friends are a whole continent, but mine are all seven.
They say that the one person you have your heart set on should only be a small lake,
But mine is my ocean, a few small drops, give or take.
I have all these thoughts and feelings hidden deep inside
And he's all of them.
He's my sadness, my anger, but mostly my pride.
My heart is my safe, where I lock all my secrets tightly away.
And there they will remain, until forever and a day.
Like a heavy rain of emotions, I've been drenched in this feeling that's so very strong.
Although it's only been awhile, I feel I've been holding this in for so long.
Now covered from head to toe, I hesitate…But tightly in my hand I hold the key
To unlock my heart and reveal all this hidden mystery.
Right in front of him, so bright and beautiful it lies
But he'll never see it, for tightly closed are his eyes.
They are the bright blue sparkles, the beauty of my ocean.
The more I gaze, the more I wish. The more I wish, the more I love him.
Every night as I sleep, I wonder… Am I crazy for feeling this way?
Still so young for this game, but my heart decides it wants to play.
I have faith I'm trying desperately to hold onto; But my hands are faintly slipping;
I think I'm going to fall soon.
I've tried so hard to make a wish, but every time my star would fall.
For one last time, it quickly shoots past,
But this time I hold on, and make my wish at last.
Will it fly me to Heaven, or again down to Hell?
His eyes still shut tightly, and mine filled with tears,
I throw in the game and give up my precious Wishing Well.

Danielle Hayes


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