- published: March 15, 2003
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In this world all men are equal,
or so I'm told.
There's just one question I'm forced to pose.
(If I may be so bold)
"Why is it then, I never get to keep the girl?"
Such a lovely
To the lady in the Pub down the road in Chester
From a drunk
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be bolder, try harder, you'll get her, you'll hold her.
windows to soul
] On: March 16, 2003
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