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Close your eyes - Now,Relax, And...
Enter. Enter into my world
The world of mystery
A world of warmth and diversion
A room to turn your sorrows into history
The room in which I filled with gleaming light

A room to coincide with the pleasantness that surrounds you
The pleasantness of relaxation
The pleasantness of romance and sensuality
A room of sensitivity and passion
Surrounded by the sweet aromic smells of sedatives
Here in the candle light room

Relax your mind and breathe deeply into your soul
Relieve the stress from within
As you break away from that deep aggression
Feel the heat of the fire as it surrounds your body
Drift your thoughts into another dimension
Into another world
A world into which you have full control

A world like no other
A world of quietness
As that other world you may soon relinquish
Because here in this world, is a world of intensity and pleasantness
Flaming, burning light upon a thousand candlesticks scorching through the night

A room of ranquility
To relax and unwind
Connecting your thoughts to the inner peace
To ease your body, your soul and your mind
Experiencing the eroticism of dazzling, flagrant light
So calm, yet so intense
Here in the candlelight room.

------
Jennifer R. K


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The following comments are for "Candlelight Room"
by Carmel Brown66

Your Kinda Right...
Thanks for your comment and advice. Yes it is a poem more towards the relaxation side. It's just something I thought of as a relaxing scene. Especially because I'm into candles. But maybe somebody has some ideas on a few good ways I could of ended it.

Carmel66

( Posted by: Carmel Brown66 [Member] On: March 14, 2003 )





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