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As I reach deep down in my heart
I feel the rapid beat of my love reaching
Closer and Closer,it jumps
Faster and Faster, it pumps
Toward you love, your heart

I can't stop it, I can't hide it
My abundant love reaching higher and higher
Grabbing hold of you and the love you have given to me
Wanting you, needing you, taking in the romantic showers of love
God has sent to us

Damn, I want you, I need you
The emotions in my mind floating around like the stars in the sky
So high, so free
So dramatically

This inclination between us
So definite, So strong
Like a fire burning from the top of a mountain
So fierce, so intense
So heated

The love between us glowing so intentionally
Kisses of love that reach our inner souls
Touches of our skin abiding by one another's love
As if to reach to an everlasting climax
Of a sweet execution

Each thought in my mind pondering
Of how our love came together
As our bodies braided among ourselves
As our hearts found each other
And our minds, are hearts, believing in forever.

------
Jennifer R. K


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