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Author's Note: Recent events have inspired me to write this poem along with the recently published story. Please excuse me if to you this is getting redundant, because to me, writing is a form of cheap therapy.

I can forgive,
Because of what He did for me.
I can forgive,
Because my eyes have been opened.
I can forgive,
Because I know how it feels.
I can forgive,
Because it could have been me.
I can forgive,
Because I know who you are.
And I can forgive,
Because I love you…


The following comments are for "I Can Forgive"
by philliephan2k3

Liked it
I liked this poem. I liked the simplicity and I liked the way it explained itself so clearly.
Score 7/10.

( Posted by: Spudley [Member] On: March 9, 2003 )

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