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I got to make a confession,
about a thing or two.
It was me who broke the eggs,
and spilled the milk too.

I got to make a confession,
I feel you deserve to know,
I`ve been picking on your son,
and burying him in the snow.

I got to make a confession,
something I shouldn`t have done,
I have been feeding your dog worms,
and kicking him just for fun.

I got to make a confession,
I didn`t think it through.
I filled your purse with used kleenex,
From when I had the flu.

I gotta make a confession,
In spite of all I do.
It`s all in good humor,
cause I`m so in love with you.


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The following comments are for "Confession"
by anya_awaits

Hallmark moments
Anya~
I can't put my finger on why, but I got a tremendous kick out of this poem. It's like a twisted Hallmark card that I've looked for a thousand times and never could find. You should go into business making oddball greeting cards if you have many more like this.

( Posted by: Bartleby [Member] On: May 9, 2003 )

hehehe
Ah, thank you! :-) A poem that made me laugh.
I can't really fault it... maybe the rhythm was a bit off in places, but it's not really the sort of poem that worries about that. So I'll just stick with giving it a score: 8/10. And thank you for the enjoyable read.

( Posted by: Spudley [Member] On: May 10, 2003 )





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