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Hide-And- Seek

Tell me, what are you trying hard to hide,
While there is something which you are trying to seek.
In this world money and its madness has taken many for a ride;
While the growing age of everyday has made thy Weak.

I have tried hard, love for you filled in my heart to hide,
Waiting every day for you to realize that and to seek.
Iíve good intentions, so please donít take me for a ride;
My feelings for you are genuine and towering week by week.

I have kept all my feelings for myself like a parrot trapped in a cage,
And fear that someday they too might die with me,In old age.
Unless and until you open the door of my heartís cage
And let the parrot of my feelings
Met thee in marriage.

By : - G.S.V.K.


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