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If he was forced
To sit here with me
And answer
A multiple choice
Test
Every selection
He would make
Would be
None of the above
I wouldn’t
Be able to help myself
But grin
A frustrated
Smile
And ask him kindly
To leave this room
And allow
The next patient in

This one’s got
A file longer than
The bible
He hugs it to his chest
He just cannot let go
The trauma he relives
Everyday hoping
For some new revelation
A saving grace
In those crumpled
Aging pages
I casually light a cigarette
Suggest we burn the file
He kindly excuses himself
Grabbing his file
Slams the door
To end the session

As a person
I really don’t give
A damn
What these lunatics
Delude themselves
With just to pass
The time
As a doctor
I am useless
In easing their
Troubled minds
But maybe
As a storyteller
They would awaken
Up inside
Let go of their worries
And learn
Once more
How to have
A good time

------
"If you get a feeling next time you see me
Do me a favor and let me know
'Cos it's hard to tell
It's hard to say
Oh well, okay"
Elliott Smith



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The following comments are for "Confidentiality"
by IcicleIcicle

lol
well considering i am not actually a shrink, and those are not actually patients of mine there is no law being broken lol
but i don't think therapy is for everyone ....i think people really just need mindfullness....it's a buddhist thought...which some therapists have actually taken into their practice
being mindful is a beautiful and freeing sense of being :)
thanx for reading!

( Posted by: icicleicicle [Member] On: March 17, 2008 )

what I get from this
is that relationships are not therapy, but all too often relationships ARE USED as therapy, which breeds inequality, which breeds cynicism, which means not only does the “therapy” fail, but the relationship also. sheesh, talk about an exercise in futility! ;) found this wry and well put-together. nice to see a frehs post from you.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: March 18, 2008 )

:)
that was 100% accurate Auld!!
i wouldn't say that was my goal in writing this... the scenario kinda just popped into my head...but if i were to try and explain or give a moral to the poem..well that would be it

i would also add to that bit the importance of not clinging/letting go....i feel like everyone's advice is to just let go, yet very few ppl have the capacity to do that

thanx for reading!

( Posted by: IcicleIcicle [Member] On: March 18, 2008 )





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