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She builds scaffolds out of
crazy oxymorons like urban wilderness
& perches herself there,
raucous as a winter night,
declaims poetry of hers
fricative against naked throat
& it is stars themselves which soften it,
balm for entering souls
like you enter temples,
red-slow
& never read.
Then they settle, fragmented scintillants,
metaphorically meted, muted, verse poured,
versed, versicled
into heartbeats
more or less receptive receptacles
& Spring stirs at this, still
underworld-sleepy, unformed.

Mythologists publish a recall
on their gods and muses, defective,
bring them in from their fieldwork
at poets' awe, disbelief,
never ascribe them omnipresence
because you don't inspire and die,
you expire and die
& poets must be mortal, it is said.

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Of all known institutions, I attend only two: church, in my heart, and school, in yours. Both are subject to demolition. - Lucie Adams, 2007
It is only for poetry to know how many stanzas fit into one caress. - Lucie Adams, 2008


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The following comments are for "Autopilotbio"
by windchime

this poem
is my present to myself, this morning. it has poetry fricative against naked throat, and it has “fragmented scintillants”- keep returning to those…

keep returning too, to “& poets must be mortal, it is said.” … kept thinking, yeah, and it’s also said by some that the earth is flat/ that until Columbus people used to believe the earth was flat … false impression probably published by same damn mythologists…

give me poetry “versicled/ into heartbeats” any day… I believe we’re all as mortal/ immortal as each other… well, at least ninety-percent of the time… I love this, Lucie, but I choose to live at the top half of the poem, perched on the scaffold where the stars themselves soften her poetry…

get a grip, no! nothing! never! [in that order] ;) but that’s just me. excuse rambling, am porridge brained today. will return. the best to you, friend.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: March 18, 2008 )

flying poetic skies
Lucie-
Manipulating 'borrowed' words, we offer them as self-exposed representaions, to be transliterated/processed, then...?

"red-slow"..I like that..

Highly enjoyable read..a pleasure, per usual..

B






( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: March 18, 2008 )

return to poetic skies
Lucie-
Noted to return. Glad.

B

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: March 22, 2008 )

Lucie's IMMORTALITY
Oh, come on Lucie, you know better, poets NEVER die, just their bodies. They come back again and again and again, their spirit and words are eternal. I love the outright ethereal surreal feel of this, an excellent, BRILLIANT poem. I loved it. I love it. I love it more than I did a second ago and upon reading it a few more times. Thank you Lucie. Miss you. Hope your responsibilities are not letting you forget to try and find a few moments in each day for The Lucie! Lucie LIVES. By the way last night I had a rant convulsion episode that had to be written or I would just burst. It reads like an epileptic fit, but if you get a chance sometime in the future, tell me if you think "is it JUST me?" Yeah, I'm plugging it. I haven't been on the Lit.Org in months. I tell you though, after I wrote my rant last night I had to take a Valium. Yeah....keep those around just in case and last night was "one of those cases". Thank you so much for sharing this poem and your continual prolific, never disappointing talent with the rest of us lessor immortals.

Blessings and good wishes to you Lucie;-)

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Admin] On: April 16, 2008 )





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