Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search
 




Average Rating
7.5

(2 votes)


RatingRated by
10Unknown
5crystal2005

You must login to vote

Mayans and cultures related
See life as a short period of time
As a rupture between two infinites lands
We are floating on that rupture

We decide on what side we should land
We are cought between god and evil
We darkle between heaven and hell
Life is the shortest dream of your eternity


Related Items

Comments

The following comments are for "The Death"
by silent





Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.


Username:
Password:
Subject:
Comment:





Login:
Password: