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The Feel [ A Poem ]

I want to feel your hand touch mine,
And clasp it tight to know that youíre mine.
I want to hug you to feel your heart beat
with that of mine;
I want to look into your eyes
the reflection of mine.
Let the silence speak a thousand words,
In the language of love which
We both understand.
I would do anything for you
even fight a war with arrows and Swords;
Let whatever may come, by you side
I will stand.
If my enemy rib opens my chest
He will find your name engraved
On my heart of mine,
Every little moment spent with you
Is a treasure to me,
I want those moments to be frozen in time,
Every word that you utter is a command to me.
I want to kiss you lips and drink
The wine of your soul,
I want to be lost in your magic and
Forget my very goal.
I want to feel the touch of your soul;
Become one and you make me feel whole.

By :- G.S.V.K.


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