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Cullen’s pale, thin features framed dark brooding eyes that slowly scanned the ‘Gormanghast’ night-club. The air was thick with smoke that danced eerily in the dim lights. The heady aroma of perfume, sweat and blood beckoned him. His shoulder length jet-black hair matched the long leather coat which he unbuttoned and allowed to swing open. As Cullen walked to the bar, he continued to look around. He knew members of a vampire cult frequented the club and had knowledge of Tasmin.
At the bar, a young woman smiled at him,


“Hello, I don’t remember seeing you here before.”


“I’ve not been here before.” he replied calmly and turned away slightly to indicate his lack of interest in her.


“Okay, fair enough. Buy you a drink anyway?”
Cullen turned back again, it was not often that a human surprised him. Perhaps he had been too hasty in dismissing this one. She had bright blue intelligent eyes, elfin face and short, brown hair cut in a bob. He nodded,


“Bloody Mary please.”


“Ah, hence the get up. You’re one of that vampire lot.”




“No, I just like tomato juice with my vodka.”


“Oops, sorry. Mind you, the look suits you better than most of those sad prats.”


“Thank you, I think your look is also erm, interesting.”
She glanced down at her pale blue crop top and patched jeans,


“Oh ta mush.”


“I’m curious about the ‘vampire lot’ – what do you know of them?”


“Well, let’s sit in one of the booths, it’ll be a bit quieter there.”
The girl guided him to a line of enclosed booths on the far wall. They sat and she introduced herself as Sirocco.


“So what d’you want to know?”


Cullen spread his hands wide,


“Anything and everything.”


“And why?”


“I doing research for a book on youth culture.”


“And you’re going to write about vampire cults?”


“That is correct.”


“Hmm – almost believable, but not quite.”

Cullen folded his arms – this was becoming annoying,


“Very well, I’m a true vampire and I’m looking for a lost love from two centuries ago.”


Sirocco stood up,


“Okaay – this conversation just got major league weird. I’m sorry pal, I don’t mind Goth, but there’s such a thing as taking something too seriously.”
She began to walk away. Cullen closed his eyes and reached for her motor control – there it was. He turned her around and with difficulty made her return to the table and sit down.
Sirocco slapped him and hissed,


“Don’t you ever do that again. My God - it was like being violated.”

He stared at Sirocco, dumbfounded. The slap shouldn’t have been possible. Her resistance to his mind control shouldn’t have been possible. There was an explanation, a very improbable one, but Cullen needed to know. He spoke quietly,


“I apologise, Sirocco. Will you still help me?”


She glared at him for a moment then muttered,


“I must be going daffy in my old age but all right, where do you want me to start? No, hang on, first of all, how did you do that mind thingy?”
Hands wide he said simply,


“I told you, I’m a true vampire.”
Sirocco sat back in her seat and nodded slowly,


“Well, well, how bloody ironic. The Disciples of Tasmin as they call themselves all claim to know vampire secrets and yackity yak and so on. Yet I’m the one who meets the real deal.”
She studied him for a moment then asked,


“Are you okay? If I thought it was possible, I’d swear you’d gone even paler.”


“What did you call them?”


“Disciples of Tasmin – why?”


“Tasmin is the name of the woman I’m seeking.”


“Yeah? It’s my middle name as well.”



Cullen whispered,


“Is it a name passed down in your family?”


“S’right, my great, great oh I dunno several greats grandma ago was called Tasmin Proctor.”
The vampire gazed at his fingertips,


“Then it happened. It really happened.”


“What really happened?”


“Tasmin gave birth, yet she was an undead. I converted her, I made love to her. But fathering a child was supposed to be impossible.”


“But apparently it happened.” Sirocco threw back her head and laughed,


“My God, I’m talking to one of my ancestors. Just a sec, if you’re still alive, sorry, still here. Are you saying that Tasmin is still around as well?”


“Just so.”


“Oh no, oh bloody hell. My cousin is called Tasmin Proctor, she queens it over that lot. She’s over two hundred years old?”


Cullen smiled,


“Taz liked to be in charge.”


“Sounds like my cuz all right. I’ll be damned.”
Sirocco stood,


“C’mon gramps, it’s time to finish the story with a happy ending eh? Let’s go and meet Tasmin Proctor.”


“Sirocco?”


“Yeah?”


“Don’t call me gramps.”



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In five hundred years time, most of us will be forgotten dust. But Hitler will still be remembered, God loves irony.


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The following comments are for "Vampyric Romantic"
by Ogg

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A few thoughts: First off, I liked the story - your description of your characters gives the reader an immediate feel for them.

The dialogue feels forced - not very natural. The part where Cullen mind controls Sirocco is awkward. I had no idea what "motor control" was and her sudden reaction to him when he states he is a vampire misses a beat. She is suddenly willing to help him, which is again - just a bit too sudden.

Are you planning on adding to it? The story caught my attention, and with a little expansion on the details, perhaps a bit more dialogue and getting to know the characters....it will read fine.

Just my thoughts - hope it helps in some way.

( Posted by: Verity [Member] On: October 2, 2007 )

Vampyric, sans romantic
I like this. I quite liked “Voice from the shadows” too. Like your horror in general, as much for what it isn’t as for what it is, and I’ll tell you what it isn’t too: It isn’t the sexed-up corset-ripping soul[less]-searching morality play Anne bloody Rice school of writing. Apologies to fans, but I’ve had just about enough of that kind of self-indulgent preachy pretentiousness… this, this is different, these vamps inhabit the same world as everybody else, they blend with the mundane, they use the same lingo, nothing trite or affected here, they are “part”… and that works, it works good… quite like the idea of a dysfunctional vampire family appeals to me… found it too funny how Tasmin would have a cliquey goth following, that’s a nice touch…

To pick up on Verity’s point, maybe more Sirocco resistance to the mind control might work, or maybe just a note how she was so ready to help ‘cause she “always knew” sort-of-thing… she strikes me as the type who has know weirdos and weirdness in spades before now anyway ;)

so yeah, enjoyed… still following fear, waiting for next exciting instalment with baited breath.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: October 5, 2007 )

Paul (the Ogg) brings something fresh to the worlds of vampire *gothica ...
I love this, and like Shannon has already said, the whole idea of a cliquey goth following is too cool. Of course vampire families are going to have weirdness, strange family relations, and dysfunction like the rest of us. Where is the next installment?
I have always liked vampire stories, the whole dark Gothic thing, but so much of what is published out there is so trite, over-done, already done, over and over the same. In this you have brought something fresh and unique to the table. Thank you.

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Admin] On: October 12, 2007 )

Ah
Hadn't actually planned to do another, although I see what you mean. It needs re-vamping first (ouch - sorry!) then I'll relaunch it and see what happens. Lena, I'm writing a lot of stuff on Triond.com at the moment and that's where I'm tending to park any other vampire/gothy type tales. Fact is, the site earns me a bit of money, not much but I can't post in two places at once. I'd especially like you to read my 'ten cool things about vampires' piece - It was a lot of fun researching that one. I'm still not sure about the first ever vampire film. I think it may have been a French silent released in 1915. ANy ideas on that score?

( Posted by: Ogg [Member] On: October 13, 2007 )

First?...Paul ( Ogg)
I think the first vampire movie ever made was "The Vampire" 1913, directed by Robert G. Vignola...then came the famous "Nosferatu" classic.

OK, I will check out your other site as requested, sounds interesting...the ten most, eh?

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Admin] On: October 13, 2007 )





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