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Spending my time making others happy
Doing what they bid and what they demand
Wasting time otherwise spent doing what I want
Saying 'of course' to their face
Thinking 'screw you' in my head
Hating what I've become
Wanting to be what others are
Seeing those around me get rewarded
Knowing that I'll get nothing in return
Being a doormat to the world
Fearing a lifetime of this
Questioning no authority
Relying on others to make the decisions
Hoping to change one day
Realizing that it'll never happen
Going through the paces day after day
Wondering when it will all stop.


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