Effleurage
by Flonigus (Member) - published: May 29, 2007
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Effleurage

Enter with me into words
Encircle your hips
With what we trade
In honeysuckle strands

Enter with me into touch
To rectify the matter
Of a person like a turtle
On its back

Yours or mine

Or both

------
johnlovejr at hotmail dot com

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Effleurage
your poems never disappoint. a subtle, sensual, evocative piece, rich in sensation and quiet but powerful emotion.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: May 31, 2007 )

more than one
Two.

Words and touch.

Which (ought to) make the title plural:

"Effleurages".

Otherwise, like Shannon said.

Plus, hypnotic.

Thank you for this.

Lucie

( Posted by: windchime [Member] On: June 4, 2007 )

Shannon & Windchime
If it is possible, I feel singularly honored by the comments from you both.

Thank you.

~ John

( Posted by: Flonigus [Member] On: June 5, 2007 )

Flonigus
I read this in the daylight. Now, I'm gonna' have to read it in the dark, under the covers with a flashlight, and hope she soon comes to bed. Sweating now.

williamhill

( Posted by: williamhill [Member] On: June 5, 2007 )

I like it!
I am with Charlie on this one, looking for a flashlight too. Enjoyed reading you John. So nice to come around and find words that make you feel.

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: June 5, 2007 )

Thanks Charlie & Nae
Good to hear from you, Charlie & Nae. More rascally poets always welcome and appreciated.

Interesting phrase, Nae- "words that make you feel." That is something to shoot for.

Take care.

~ John

( Posted by: Flonigus [Member] On: June 6, 2007 )

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