River of Lust
by nae411 (Member) - published: January 24, 2007
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I want to eat
you from the inside
out, taste every thought,
both hidden and shared.
Want to feel
your breath as it
sustains the body
that makes my soul speak.
Rise high on a
throne till I call you
down to this realm where
I’m enlightened by lips
that carry words like a river of lust.

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I am on a journey. Looking for Me. Everyday I get a little closer. The more time goes by the more I realize I'm always changing. This journey could take forever... Renae L. Soler

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The following comments are for "River of Lust"
by nae411

i think i speak
for most people when i say that i wouldn't mind swimming in that river more often. you have a great way with words.

j.jd.

( Posted by: johnjohndoe [Member] On: January 25, 2007 )

johnjohndoe and lust
I like that river myself. Thank you for stopping by!!!!

Hugs,
Nae ;0)

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: January 26, 2007 )

livers and rivers
yesterday my pickled brain misread the title as "Liver of Rust". Argh, I thought, I'm not reading that. This morning, however, I realised my mistake...

this is a gorgeous poem. I like most that it encompasses all possible elements of a poetic passion: senses, soul and language. 'specially fond of those enlightening lips... Definitely wouldn’t mind a dip, but I’d be infinitely more likely to get a stone cold dunk in the Bathtub of Ennui instead ;)

Fine stuff. Much enjoyed.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: January 26, 2007 )

River...
Nae...
When's the next boat leaving? As Always You are a Lusty Babe...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: January 27, 2007 )

river of lust
Hello Nae..

I have been absent for more than 6 month and when I came back , I wanted to start my day with your writing....proffesioal usage of words..words must be very thankful and honored that you used them ...

Hiba

( Posted by: fairgrace [Member] On: January 29, 2007 )

AMG, Nitz Kitty and fairgrace
AMG, Your title and comment had me laughing so hard my side hurt. Thank you so much for reading me and getting me after the translation was clarified. Hugs.

Kacee, The boat leaves in an hour. Hop on!

Fairgrace, welcome back! Thank you so much for your comment. Made me smile from ear to ear!!!!

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: January 30, 2007 )

Rver of Lust
Nae,

Just paying a brief visit in the middle of the night to see what I've been missing. Of course I looked you up and was delighted to see you are still up to your old 'standards'.

I am currently editing and posting my older work on 'piptalk' a site grandma pointed out to me to get a different perspective prior to considering publishing my work.

When I get back into 'production' mode again you may have to suffer my presence a bit more.

Untill then, nice to read you again and all my wishes to my frinds at lit.

Have Fun,

Ivor

(ivor@ivordavies.co.uk)

( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: April 26, 2007 )

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