Who Is Prey?
by nae411 (Member) - published: November 8, 2006
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Category - Poetry
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You watch,
I allow it.
Tension filled room,
you’ve caught me.
Anxious drops
of hunger
roll down your face,
this voyeuristic facade
is no game.
Fool – I’ve played you well.
Who is whose prey?
I dance - you hide behind curtains,
peeking,
risking all,
to watch the unknowing.
Carefree moves
are scripted.
I taunt you,
tease you,
let you think you
have the upper hand,
after all, your obsession
gives me satisfaction.

------
I am on a journey. Looking for Me. Everyday I get a little closer. The more time goes by the more I realize I'm always changing. This journey could take forever... Renae L. Soler

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The following comments are for "Who Is Prey?"
by nae411

Who Is Prey?
Nice turning of the tables, with a killer last line. great.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: November 9, 2006 )

Egos feeding on egos...
...it's the name of the game, and everyone's a playa. The ladies' man and the ladies...it's a tug-pull relationship of tragically comedic proportion. Neither the xx nor the xy would be satisfied without the delusion that they were the one in control, when really it's all just ego pulling humanity along with i need you to need me you need me to need you fueling the cycle. After all, what's the voyee without the voyeur, the voyeur without the voyee?...other than lone-lie.

( Posted by: DeletedUser [Member] On: November 9, 2006 )

Two-Way Street
Ah, yes, love is the only 'game' in which both people are the predator and the prey: mutualism.

-ArsPoet2789ica

( Posted by: ArsPoet2789ica [Member] On: November 9, 2006 )

Prey
Ah, Nae...
We always have to let them think it was their idea...we chase em till they catch us...hehe...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: November 9, 2006 )

Exhibit Nae
Indeed.

Enjoyed,

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: November 9, 2006 )

Voyeur's prey
Hey guys thank you for your comments! Actually Bobby you gave me the idea! Laughing, that sounds so wrong but it is just by a comment you made.

Anyway, just wanted to turn the tables on the voyeur watching the exhibitionist who is getting her own thrills.

So glad you enjoyed.

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: November 9, 2006 )

Renae/ Inspiration...
..comes in many forms...some more pleasing than others.

Wink...

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: November 12, 2006 )

prey/obsession
The watched is watching self being watched. Which makes the (incidental) exhibitionist a voyeur also. Intricate and complex in its dynamics, this. And alluring, too!

( Posted by: windchime [Member] On: November 13, 2006 )

"Victims, Aren't We All?"
I've often thought of this, the thrills that are given from eyes that are thrilled. This was beautiful, and boldly written. It's like I'm doing favors for strangers when I'm watching them as they sleep, watching them make love from in the closet, and seeing them change from underneath their beds. It's good to hear you again.

( Posted by: BAAL [Member] On: November 13, 2006 )

Prey and more prey
Eric, You are rotten to the core. I love it!

Bobby yes agreed some forms much more pleasing than others.

Lucie, Yes sometimes there is no end to the fetishes. Thank you my friend for stopping by!

BAAL, Yes I get you when you get me! Nice to be writing again.

Hugs,
Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: November 13, 2006 )

Naujghty Nae!
Well now Nae...I see you've been up to your old tricks while I've been away...Naughty..Naughty...Naughty (and I wouldn't have you any other way darlin!)

This one was right on!!!

Love ya
Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: November 14, 2006 )

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