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Hatred
A Poem

Note :-If a terrorist were to write a poem.I think it may be something like this.

I've filled my heart,
Soul and mind,
With so much poisonous
Hatred than sweet Love.
It's too late now
To forget and
Leave it behind,
As I've gone too far.
I can do anything
To ruin their lives,
I don't mind even
If I die in this war.
As I've chosen
Not pretty roses,
But deadly guns,
Bombs and knives,
Every day of my life
Is fueled by hate,
And I can rewrite
Anyone's fate.

By:- GSVK


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The following comments are for "Hatred"
by G.S.VASUKUMAR

Yes!
Yes! Exactly the way I feel about terrorists.

( Posted by: ograd77 [Member] On: November 1, 2006 )

sad but true.
your poem rings with the truth of our times.

j.jd.

( Posted by: johnjohndoe [Member] On: November 2, 2006 )

Thanks...
Wanda, William for ur ratings...

Thanks ograd and John for ur comments..

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: November 4, 2006 )





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