Unforgiven
by Charmr (Member) - published: September 9, 2006
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Category - Poetry
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Good Jane
Bad War

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Charmr

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by Charmr

unforgiven
Welcome back!

You've pared this down beyond its essence down to a hint, yet it still works for me: amazing! I get from this that bad things happen to good people and that a soldier named Jane died in the war?

I also get from this that neighbourhood dogs got into a fight and the dog named Jane came home bloody and you petted her and said this poem to her?

My friend, when 4 words get to me in a way that I can make a 3 paragraph comment, then the poem's gotta be good!

Nice to see you here again!

Lucie

( Posted by: windchime [Member] On: September 9, 2006 )

unforgiven
And here I sit thinking this was about Jane Fonda and the Viet Nam war...How dense am I? How are ya doin Charmr? Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: September 9, 2006 )

Clever
But then you always are. Smiles!!

Char

( Posted by: Char [Member] On: September 9, 2006 )

Charmr's Jane
Tres cool..

Cool takes, in comments above..We come perception influenced..

First impression was of relationship gone sideways..

Enjoyed,
RW

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: September 9, 2006 )

Mary jane
. . . is what I thought of, and I expect you did too. ;)

( Posted by: viper9 [Member] On: September 9, 2006 )

Mustard Gas Seed
This piece can turn the reader around on its tight pivot and launch him into any number of directions, but they all seem to lead to the same place.

Good poem
Bad war

~ John

( Posted by: Flonigus [Member] On: September 10, 2006 )

Good Jane, Bad War
The great thing about these four little words is that they're easy for even a drunk to remember. Count this as one poem that I can take with me anywhere, even to the bar where my computer is not allowed to go.

I also saw the Jane Fonda / Viet Nam connection that Kacee made, though this could mean numerous things. Loved this, seriously.

( Posted by: chinadoll [Member] On: September 12, 2006 )

Unforgiven
Thanks so very much for the very nice comments. I am spending most all of my art time now on my music, but I should have more time for poetry in the near future. I am hoping anyway.........Romay

( Posted by: Charmr [Member] On: September 20, 2006 )

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