8.34
by Bran (Member) - published: August 21, 2006
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Category - Poetry
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I married that woman
my baby
Married her to keep her
I wanted her because
everyone else wanted her
Don't want nobody else
taken her way from me

I can't recall
Just what
Whatcha do when you love
a woman just that much

Now
Don't tell me no lie
Did my woman bring her ass here?
who she rode with ?

I can't recall
Just what
Whatcha do when you love
a woman just that much

Now I hate her
this life ain't right
behind curtains privacy
we in all out war
Makes me wanna go

I can't recall
Just what
Whatcha do when you love
a woman just that much

When i'm doin all the workin'
she Know i'm doin'what's right
cats comin round
so lowdown
Tryin' to steal my woman

I can't recall
Just what
Whatcha do when you love
a woman just that much

this mornin'
got up
got together
blues took my hand
Never thought i wasn't good

I can't recall
Just what
Whatcha do when you love
a woman just that much

the lord can take me
tell me this woman
my woman
won't be mean no mo'
all my lovin'
but i might just have to go

I can't recall
Just what
Whatcha do when you love
a woman just that much

mornin'
she float round the house
Ask her a question
she swearin
wantin to kick me out

I can't recall
Just what
Whatcha do when you love
a woman just that much

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The following comments are for "8.34"
by Bran

Song Lyrics
I can almost hear this one. This would make a good tune!

( Posted by: feithline [Member] On: August 23, 2006 )

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Thank you.

( Posted by: Bran [Member] On: August 23, 2006 )

In Gmin
Yes, a great blues vibe in Gminor, the sadest of all keys.

I can almost hear a slow, droning organ in the distant back ground, drummer using brushes, stand up bass and a naked Gibson hollow body playing really thin lead licks over each refrain...maybe just a little bit of harp.

Really great lyrics -- you have a knack for writing cool blues lyrics

BW

( Posted by: BWOz [Member] On: August 23, 2006 )

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Thank you very much.

( Posted by: Bran [Member] On: August 25, 2006 )

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