Dreams
by Drastine (Member) - published: October 12, 2002
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Category - Poetry
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Dreams...

They tell more about us,
Then we ourselves can.

The light and dark of our souls,
All the truth and lies.

Some bring us joy,
Others fright.

Each night they whisper into our minds.
Allowing us no where to escape.

Giving us no chance to cover-up,
Whispering some truth of ours.

-Dras

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You cannot teach a man anything; you can only help him find it within himself.
-Galileo

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by Drastine

How true it is...
Lovely piece, Dras.

Simple. Stark. Insightful.

--Jasmine

( Posted by: Jasmine [Member] On: October 13, 2002 )

Thankee
Jasmine,

Thanks for the comment. They are always appreciated.

Later,
Dras

( Posted by: Drastine [Member] On: October 13, 2002 )

hello
i though i had better see what sort of things come out of your mind... and it is quite scary, but that is not a bad thing!

( Posted by: man eating maniac [Member] On: October 23, 2002 )

Scary
M.E.M,

Thanks for reading...trust me my mind can be scary...this is nothing.:)

Later,
Dras

( Posted by: Drastine [Member] On: October 23, 2002 )

dreams
Even the scray stuff that one dreams is important for like it or not, it's still "us". It's somewhat strange that, when one walks down the street, to think that everyone has their hidden skeletons in that closet that they don't want to discuss. Are humans all so different that our secrets are really much different too? Or do we simply _want_ our secret frights to keep to ourselves so that we have something special, however painful? Neat poem, Dras!

( Posted by: ak7raplt [Member] On: December 17, 2002 )

So true
Your poem spoke to me and relieved me of the fears my last dream brought. I felt truly touched and loved it! Beautiful! *wipes tears*

( Posted by: NekoKami52 [Member] On: February 17, 2004 )

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