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You say that you're sorry
And what can you do
You'd think you were dead,
And being buried too.

What a time to be selfish!





(Dedicated to all the pricks who do this.
Stop being so hideously polite.)



Mr. Jonas P. Upright: "Lord, Lord, take this bastard to Hell!
And Leave me be. Thank you, Lord."-


All Hail Jesuschriss, savior to the stars



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jesuschriss; aka jimmy condomhead (of jimmy condomhead and the rubberband peanut stand, featured on myspace music); aka cgstarling; aka johnny longhead; aka lib raulphf; aka jc bibble; aka jc; aka christof gee starling; aka (jcgs); aka




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The following comments are for "Funeral Sympathy"
by jesuschriss

Sentiment
We need more sentimental poems of this sort.

Your long trail of comments worked -- you lured me in! I hadn't read anything of your since that interview, and was pleased to find that your twisted sense of humour extends to poetry as well. You're a credit to the Godhead, Jesus!

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: October 26, 2005 )

o.k. I'm here


Now what?

( Posted by: drsoos [Member] On: October 26, 2005 )





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