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We might be friends,
In a little while.
If I'll be able to stand,
To see you smile.
How did it get this bad?
So tangled up?
Was it really just me,
Who messed it up?

Why'd you let me go?
Why'd you stand for it at all?
I know I'm the one who ran,
But you should have fought me,
Fought me till your dying day.
Why'd you stand for it at all?

Why'd you fill my dreams,
With such sweet words,
Such sweet lies?
Why'd you crush my spirit,
When it meant nothing,
To you anyway?
Can you tell me this?

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Define yourself or someone else will.


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