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One step at a time
Held me till I choke
Your move and mine
Applaud each greatest stroke

Shower me with your water
Till dawn and get soak
Here we flows and glide
Dearly we newer mistook

Your morning kisses
Feels like gentle feathers
Your gentle touch fills
The room with warm air

Your roaring breathed
Sweetly combs my hair
Smile with the sunrise
Wake up with morning flower

Shield in love together
Bonded with dreams forever
Come tonight; cover me with your blanket
Tomorrow we’ll share vows before banquet


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alfechelena


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