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I love you too for sure
by alfechelena (Member) - published: April 21, 2005
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Category - Poetry
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Words are not enough
to comprehend
Questions beckoning
upon my head

Night prayers
I am calling you dear
Dream of you in me
To feel the sphere

You said I talk too much
Though you didn’t listen that much
I care the time while you are there
I tell you that I am here

Do not miss me when I say no more
Pause and hear voice if you care
I could simply stop if I am assured
One thing i know I love you too for sure

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alfechelena


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( Posted by: alfechelena [Member] On: April 23, 2005 )





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