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I do not know what more to say
Because you never put your shoes on mine.
You will never feel the pain I have been thru
Because you never see me cry.

You could wipe out my tears but you’ll never understand
I do not know what else could break my heart,
For I have fallen and my faith is queried.

It was an angel’s life shinning with mine
It was my light that has gone not yours,
It was my distress, my own losing & my life
That I dreamed to place into my arms and heart.

What more you should know?
That I sometime, I wanted to give up my life
For the one I love and to have my life back.
If I answer you, can you put it all back?

It would not matter to me now
For I will not question why….
Because I know one day and just one day
I knew & I will have life again at given time.


-All rights reserved, © alfechelena

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alfechelena


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The following comments are for "life again at given time"
by alfechelena

Love or death
They can be so similar at times. If it is love that your speaking of I've been in those shoes. But at the same time we can both probably say that we have also worn the shoes that do the hurting. And so true that we will all have life again at given time.

( Posted by: SeanMicheals [Member] On: April 18, 2005 )





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