Average Rating 0.00 (0 votes) You must login to vote I hold in my hand the lives of nine men. I can feel the weight of the metallic millimeter. But not grasp it... Desperate, I rush past my fears pushing aside my sanity. This is my only option, no turning back now. A piercing sound...and my conscience cries out. I did not know it then that the lives I held in my hand were ten.

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