Please pass the...
by nae411 (Member) - published: June 16, 2004
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Category - Poetry
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Please pass the love.
with a side of consideration,
a drop of passion,
and a pinch of humor.

While you are at it,
pass the smile,
with a side of hope,
a drop of compassion,
and a pinch of desire.

Since you are there anyway,
throw in a ton of happiness,
a side of friendship,
a drop of flirtation,
and a pinch of you!

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I am on a journey. Looking for Me. Everyday I get a little closer. The more time goes by the more I realize I'm always changing. This journey could take forever... Renae L. Soler

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The following comments are for "Please pass the..."
by nae411

Life Time...
"This journey could take forever..."
Or at least the rest of this lifetime huh?
I like the dinner table at meal time affect... Another excellent write...

( Posted by: daprdan [Member] On: June 17, 2004 )

Very Clever
What a great recipe... I shall rememver to make it often... Thank you! good write. Sincerely, Bev Raffaele http://www.artspoetry.com I would love to feature this piece on my website...

( Posted by: BevRaffaele [Member] On: June 17, 2004 )

A Side of Friendship
Nae;
This is written so beautifully. You are becoming more and more a Great writer of all time here. I love your work.

Blessings to you & Family,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: June 17, 2004 )

Reply
Bev, I would be honored to be featured on your website. Thank you.

Thank you Daprdan and Jeannie for your kind words.

Love reading from all of you!!!

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: June 17, 2004 )

Appetizing!!
Wow, nae, this is wonderful. I am glad I had time to come to read and comment. Light-hearted and touching, thanks for this!

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: June 17, 2004 )

A pinch of you!
And which part of him did you pinch, poet? This was candid, and tender, and reverent without pretention. I loved it. Thank you.

( Posted by: windchime [Member] On: June 17, 2004 )

Dareva & Windchime
Thank you both for your comments. (Windchime I pinched everywhere!!!) HaHaHa...

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: June 17, 2004 )

S&S
You are a sensational poet, Nae! And sensual!

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: June 18, 2004 )

charming

Very sweet poem, very sweet feeling.

john

( Posted by: johnlibertus [Member] On: June 19, 2004 )

Pass the..
applause!

sweet, simple reminder of what is truely important! Im really enjoying your work, Nae!

( Posted by: SinamonAngel [Member] On: June 25, 2004 )

I'm with them ^ ^ ^ .....
this poem sums you up Nae. Did you realise that? Sweet, sensual (but I've already told you that) , sagacious and spiritual. warmest regards, huni.

( Posted by: Huni [Member] On: July 11, 2004 )

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