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Under an umbrella comprised of stars
beneath the sound of the ocean

I stand, the earth like a top spins
beneath me. Somewhere from the border

of this nation you leave me.
All night on a bus you ride

your heart in synch with a pounding surf
contracting at images seen in your sleeping.

I stand on an island as an island
this evening. Not as empty as I could be

not as whole as I wish. This is not
a night for any philosophy which

does not flow its bitter overflow
into my cup. You head towards

a future whose siren seduced you.
I reach for my hope in sky and sea
in the turning of this world
in the rising of the sun.

In a few hours the morning will find us
completely begun
the act of forgetting and covering memory
with all that is new.


------
I'd rather have permanent employment than be called fascinating


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The following comments are for "Tioman, March 24 1993"
by wrdekle

Parting...
Not always a sweet sorrow...
But it seemed to be here...
I liked this one very much...

( Posted by: daprdan [Member] On: June 16, 2004 )

93-III-3
us/completely begun is a transcendance that works superbly and gets me right there, you know? In this poem, one moment wafts into the next new moment free of baggage, free, period. This, wrdekle, is superb. Thank you!

( Posted by: windchime [Member] On: June 16, 2004 )





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