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While I sleep, things without weight
neither living nor dead
disposable but ever assailing
pieces of the world
blow across my room.



**

If words could be valued
separate from meanings
I would give you many many
to say Ifm sorry.



**

ascending the stairway
my darkened kitchen
the only light
a narrow slit in the door



**

Even driving by it
the tunnel seems hungry
inevitable.


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I'd rather have permanent employment than be called fascinating


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The following comments are for "Four Moments"
by wrdekle

Love this
I really love this poem. It does some amazing things. It's like a Haiku of America (or wherever you're from).

( Posted by: gomarsoap [Member] On: June 12, 2004 )

moments
The ephemeral quality of this appeals to me. Nice work!

( Posted by: windchime [Member] On: June 12, 2004 )





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