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Airport Photo
by wrdekle (Member) - published: June 9, 2004
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Category - Poetry
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Captured in black
Even with his arms around her
Her hands folded over each other
Carefully perched on the present
Timepiece ticking off silently on a wall
Diasporas of strangers in the corners of eyes


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I'd rather have permanent employment than be called fascinating


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by wrdekle

masterpiece!
How mellow the flow of "present" into "Timepiece"! How breathtakingly beautiful, that last line! Thank you.

( Posted by: windchime [Member] On: June 10, 2004 )





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