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When The Rains Fell

With alacrity and joy the parched grasses drank.
Daisies stretched their thin green necks toward the sky.
Clumps of monkey faced pansies in yellow and purple smiled,
Knowing their little whimsical faces would delight again.

Fir, cedar, hemlock, sequoia,
Stood tall and majestic waving their mighty boughs.
The red soil and moss beds beneath let off a pungent scent.
Tall fern drew their lacy swords and challenged the heat to return.
The spindly legged fawn twists and jumps in play,
Mother’s big brown eyes smiled, ears forward always watching.

In the city children laugh as they splash in oily rainbow colored puddles.
The air is cleaner now and congested lungs breath deeper.
Steamy asphalt smells greet nostrils as the thunder peels a hardy hello.
Tires spin as if on ice from light to light, noisy grating horns honk.
Business suits are fleeing from door to door as if attacked.

The farmer’s weathered face smiles, crinkly eyes watching the horizon.
His thirsty fields look toward harvest, his heart is greatly relieved.
Irrigation ditches flow there brown nourishing soup.
Colts kick back legs, the mare brays her admonition.
She grins, lips up, presenting big white teeth, tossing her mane.
A jack rabbit bounds by and field mice scurry.

When the rain fell, as the summer came to fruition,
Hope and faith filled hearts as the cycle started anew.
Wells of sustenance filled in barren lands,
Giving precious life and verge when certain death was imminent.
The sky delighted in its gift,
When the rains fell.

Beverly J Raffaele







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"If you have the chance to sit it out or dance, I just say Dance." writen by Mark Sanders recorded by LeeAnn Womack


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The following comments are for "When The Rains Fell"
by BevRaffaele

When The Rains Fell
Bev, I get to appreciate how it looks like in my side of the world when the rains fell. I just love how you gave life to the flora and fauna. You give them a recognition, to coexist and take part of a joy experienced by human beings when the seasons change.

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: June 18, 2004 )

Rains fell
Bev, this is so descriptive, I can actually close my eyes and smell the rain. Beautiful!

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: June 18, 2004 )

Welcome
BevRaffeale;
Even though I recognize you as a new comer, I must say, Your work is greatly appreciated. I love it when An Author write about 'rain' or anything that has to do with the outdoors.

This is a fantastic read... I may not get to comment as much as I like, but these eyes are reading your wonderful work here at Lit...


Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: June 18, 2004 )

Beautifully written Bev,
I am so glad you posted this, I love poems this descriptive. A nice read, thanks!! :-)

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: June 19, 2004 )

Thank you all
Thank you all for the very kind comments. Please give my websites a visit and sign the guestbook for me...I have a little forum there that is just getting started too... This piece was posted twice. I did'nt know how to delete this one... Sincerely, Bev

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