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(verses to "The Boar’s Head Carol"; refrains to "The Road Goes Ever On")


Ten cubits width to four of height,
A shiny pyramid comes to be;
Six hundred feet into the air,
And built for all eternity.

As thousands labor, Pharoah dies.
The solemn pyramid now entombs,
For life can speak, but death replies;
A mile away, the desert looms.

As ages pass, the sands blow free;
The ancient pyramid stands less tall;
Five hundred feet, now four, now three--
Yet lasting as the empires fall.

Still four to ten in ratio
The pyramid shrinks before our sight;
The sand dunes round it slowly grow
And sphinxes pass into the night.

What time had willed be unobserved
The faithful pyramid soon has lost --
Its pharoah gone to be preserved;
His gold adornments pay the cost.

A French inscription turns to dust;
Around the pyramid, ages pass.
A foreign tank decays to rust.
A bread mold grows to desert grass.

The forces move the continents;
The steady pyramid rides along.
The desert, many times immense,
Engulfs what once endeared the throng.

Still four to ten in ratio
The pyramid shrinks before our sight;
The sand dunes round it slowly grow
And oceans pass into the night.

On June the Sixth, Ten Thousand Four,
The golden pyramid still is seen,
Five inches o’er the desert floor
Before the storm can intervene.

The ill wind comes before the dawn;
The tiny pyramid, not undone,
Stands proudly as in ages gone;
Three inches high, now two, now one...

And as on Mars, as desert comes,
A stalwart pyramid disappears;
And as on Mars, the Earth succumbs;
No one is left to shed the tears.

Now nought to nought in ratio,
The pyramids vanish from our sight;
The sand dunes round them slowly grow,
And planets pass into the night.






------
It wouldn't be right to dream, while
Forgetting to live, it seems;
Nor would it be right to dwell on life
And yet forget our dreams.
-If There Were No Magicians


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The following comments are for "Time and Pyramids"
by Nimbus1944

Author note
If you're trying to sing along, the refrain is every fourth paragraph ("....in ratio"). Sorry; italics and indents didn't work, dagnabbit. For proper atmosphere, verses might be solo chant, while refrains would be a group of unruly filkers swinging half-empty mugs of ale.

( Posted by: Nimbus1944 [Member] On: March 15, 2004 )

Drinking Songs
I liked this quite a bit, especially the little bit of a surprise at the end. You've written this very well and I have no complaints.

But I noticed right off that this poem (why didn't you classify it as lyrics?) works with a drinking song I know -- "Willie Be Fair", perhaps the same song you mention just with different words?

( Posted by: hazelfaern [Member] On: March 15, 2004 )

Thanks
The comments were very much appreciated!

Oops -- never stopped to think about a Lyrics category. On a prior filk, a few who didn't have the music liked it as a poem anyway. Seems like a fair way to judge filk lyrics!

By the way, the intended "Road" melody is from the Fellowship of the Ring movie, rather than an earlier tune by Donald Swann.

The Boar's Head has been sung for almost 500 years at Oxford, so Tolkien might have heard it before writing "Road". On the other hand, lots of poems fit it by virtue of a common meter (Xanadu, Jabberwocky, Renascence) so Willie has several good drinking buddies.

Re math references, that was the inspiration -- the thought that a pyramid is perfect for gradual burial in the desert sands, since it retains its shape to the very end.

( Posted by: Nimbus1944 [Member] On: March 16, 2004 )

Really good
This was a great read. I feel like I had a geography/history/math lesson all in one sitting.

( Posted by: amethyst [Member] On: March 16, 2004 )





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