I apologize to those who felt I was attacking them with my comments. I really did want to know where the reader felt there were problems, but more I needed help in correcting those problems. Otherwise I'm simply stumbling about in my own ignorance, attempting to fix something that I didn't even see as a problem in the first place. To me, this is very important. Although I visited very briefly, I can see that this is simply not the place I need as a writer to both grow and be encouraged. This is the reason I take my leave, no other.
